Post script..

Before the grammar police come knocking, perhaps I should say that the opening line (Nothing

in Genesis can agree on many issues), was written this way deliberately - just to appear

ambiguous, lol.

Knock knock.
Postscript is one word.
What is the meaning of the two periods after postscript?
You are not saying anything; you are attempting to write.
Parenthesis are not used to refer to prior text.
The comma after the parenthesis is incorrect.
Ambiguous denotes emotion or meaning, not appearance.
No doubt each of these errors "was written this way deliberately". Even poor writing is deliberate.

It looked all good English to me as did your admonishing corrections,,but what do I know as I am not a teacher, we need to bring in the DR to be sure. Having said that the training centre who hired me for my dubious oral English skills (I'm from Newcastle) has just sent me a lesson plan for teaching IELTS, whatever that may be. What they haven's sent me is the important videos of students taking part in coherence and fluency exams. What we will do is gatecrash (1 word or 2?) the motorway tomorrow, arrive early, teach, making sure I've had a few cans to blag my way through, book into a hotel and teach again on Sunday. That's a large part of my earnings gone. What does this have to do with your post?? Nothing, only that to witness you two intellectuals sparring and not understanding why scarred me. Will I be up to teaching IELTS tomorrow when I don't really know what it is? All I know intellectually is some ancient Chinese characters which I learned to write purely for art work hobby.