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martin hainan - 2015-02-11
In response to Re: Re EF Baotou (yu2fa3)

Changing "near" to "nearly" is a solution for the agreement of the modifier, but note that her sentence ends: "from the ground up".
I wanted to protect her use of a location metaphor using "near" to complement "from the ground up". I find modifier errors less egregious than mixed or "ungrounded" (sic) metaphors.
There is also the subject-verb agreement problem. The plural subject requires "are".
All in all, a 4.5 IELTS sentence.

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Re: Re EF Baotou -- Beth -- 2015-02-10
Re: Re EF Baotou -- martin hainan -- 2015-02-11
Re: Re EF Baotou -- martin hainan -- 2015-02-10
Re: Re EF Baotou -- yu2fa3 -- 2015-02-10
Re: Re EF Baotou -- martin hainan -- 2015-02-11
Re: Re EF Baotou -- yu2fa3 -- 2015-02-11
Re: Re EF Baotou -- martin hainan -- 2015-02-12
Re: Re EF Baotou -- Beth -- 2015-02-10
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