What country are you in?

I think your poem story is quite good,
but better grammer.. "would be swell"

Can you discuss this with your professor? No? Are you surprised? Then does the college have a councillor? If not, then you have come to us and we will council you. Yes it is good to have an open mind. At the same time remember that people do not have to agree with your opinions.
Every society has conservative and innovative factions that push and pull. In many places they are killing each other so the passions run very hot. Maybe count your blessings and keep writing? It's good stuff.